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HIM Self

           One day, when deer went to the party, he looked a cramp river. He was sad, because he didn't come to party. Suddenly, a crocodile is appearing on river. Deer said to crocodile to help him.
           Crocodile wanted help him to through river, provided that deer agree for ready eaten after that. But deer disagree, because "if you eat me after through river, my stomach is empty. If you eat me after party my stomach is full". Explain deer. Crocodile agree with deer’s statement.
           Furthermore, deer ascended on crocodile’s body, and crocodile acrossed him. Crocodile said "don't forget to back there". "Oh no, I don't back there because I will live in beside village. Good bye,  bye, ... thanks  broo ...." said deer. "Ah ...ah...ah... I am really stupid. He deceive me!!!! -____- :(".

^-^ sorry if my grammar imperfect :D